This Most Perfect Hill

On this most perfect hill

with these most perfect dogs

are these most perfect people

and this most perfect fog

In this most perfect fog

that is the middle of the sea

inside the perfect middle of

the things inside that swing

In this most perfect rhyme

that takes up what it sees,

with perfect shelter from the

rain as perfect as can be,

In this most perfect day

at the apex of the sun

runs this most perfect

frog song that is roiling

from the mud

In these most perfect habits

of the waving of the trees,

through this imperfect language

rides a perfect brilliancy.  


In the poem the most perfect hill shows everything great and nothing wrong. It seems that it's a place, that the author enjoyed coming to and having fun when she was younger. The author likes to describe  everything about it, is perfect. With the hill having the most perfect dogs, people, fog, and so on. With describing all about this sensational hill or perfect hill, it shows that anybody would love to come, to the most perfect hill. 


1. In this most perfect day at the apex of the sun runs this most perfect frog song that is roiling from the mud.- Shows how the at when the suns at its highest point in the day the frogs start to sing. Personally I think it would be annoying, but it's perfect to the author. 


2.In this most perfect rhyme that takes up what it sees, with perfect shelter from the rain as perfect as can be. - I like how the author starts that sentence with the word rhyme, and makes the passage into one. Though it didn't really rhyme all the way through. 


3. On this most perfect hill with these most perfect dogs are these most perfect people and this most perfect fog. - The passage sort of shows us where the hill is. It's almost seems like it's on bay, but it's only because of the fog.