Across the BayBy Donald Davie
A queer thing about those waters: there are no
Birds there, or hardly any.
I did not miss them, I do not remember
Missing them, or thinking it uncanny.
The beach so-called was a blinding splinter of limestone,
A quarry outraged by hulls.
We took pleasure in that: the emptiness, the hardness
Of the light, the silence, and the water’s stillness.
But this was the setting for one of our murderous scenes.
This hurt, and goes on hurting:
The venomous soft jelly, the undersides.
We could stand the world if it were hard all over.
This poem is very interesting in a weird way though. Why I really chose it is because I saw the title and I wondered what was across the bay. Also really it was just the first one I saw. Though how it makes me feel when I read is one word " puzzled". I really couldn't connect to it. Alls I really know is he's describing this beach and how horrible it is. Though this why I really liked it is because of all the details he wrote about and seems like a place I would never want to go to.
1. The venomous soft jelly, the undersides.- I like how he used this line to tell how horrible the beach is
2. Teh beach so-called was a blinding splinter of limestone.- I shows how small the beach is.
3. A queer thing about those waters: there are no birds there, or hardly any. It shows how empty the beach is.
Good choice, Andrew! I enjoyed reading this poem and seeing your thoughts on it.
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